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~YourMomsMustache Sep 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you!!
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:icongreatkingrat88:
The line underlined with green has a spelling error- it's supposed to be "too nervous to breathe", not "breath".
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:iconyourmomsmustache:
~YourMomsMustache Sep 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Yes and thanks.
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:iconrussiashi:
sounds pretty much how i feel right now about a certain someone. /gulp
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:iconyourmomsmustache:
~YourMomsMustache Sep 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh buddy yeah. You and me both.
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*Oseltamivir Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Did you screenshot this from your computer? So tiny!! And the squiggly green underline... haha
But regardless, your poem is excellent, albeit rather sad! Good job <3
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:iconyourmomsmustache:
~YourMomsMustache Sep 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
hahaha I decided to leave the line there on purpose to go with the cursor and the unfinished last line. I thought it gave a sense of being really raw and unfinished? Just my thoughts. :D Thanks though!
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*Oseltamivir Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yeah I got that feeling
:hug:
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